Feedback

So the first term ended and i recently got my feedback which i am to take into account and further improve my work, this post is really just a document that compiles all of this feedback so that i can easily look back and remind myself of the areas i need to work on.

The first piece of feedback which is quite clear is that i need to work on a calibrated monitor as the images that i have produced, many of them are either too dark from post production or have colour casts which diminish how effective the images are. Working on a calibrated monitor would allow me to accurately see the images with a realistic representation of colour and tones.

I also need to consider my lighting more so that i can produce images which are not only composed correctly but also have an aesthetic and effective quality of light so that my semiotics can be more accurately expressed.

In terms of my presentation skills i am in need of some great improvements which i knew right from the get go that this was the case.
My interaction with the audience was minimal, my thoughts were all over the place and the presentation lacked pace and effective delivery. the information was all there it was just the way that i presented the information which was flawed and so this is an area i need to work on and practice.

When it came to my professional studies i feel i did pretty good however i received some confusing feedback regarding my bio which states that i need to have a third person bio in the about me section. the about me section of my website has always been third person and so this is something which i need to ask about. other than that the main thing i need to look at is my CV the language used within my CV  could be tightened up  little to ensure i can get the most out of the things i have put on it.
I have also been informed of some typos within my website. i will strive to fix this as son as possible.